During the first week of school, when writing the higher education paper, I thought that peer review was just on things that were slight details, such as punctuation and spelling. This Is what my comments were solely based on, and those were also the comments that I received on mine. I didn’t change much about that paper because I was convinced that my first one was perfect and there was nothing else I needed to change, but after learning about things such as organization, sentence structure and analysis within my paper, my paper started to seem bland. With that, I used my local revision and the critiquing from other peoples comments to influence mine and help others not think the way I did. I would make more comments on full paragraphs or explanations or even significance of a point so that it would further other peoples papers.
Everything you can imagine is real.
